(applause) Very nice! ;) I really like this one. This is probably my favorite poem so far. (happy) Keep writing. Ja ne

Oh, I don't know why... but this poem looks really pretty ^_^G'job Annie! *huggle*Just one suggestion-'because I want the two of us to be together forever' should probably be in past tense, because the previous line was past tense, so you might want to change 'want' to 'wanted'Other than that, good job! I'll admit it's not my -favorite- work of yours, but it's cute ^_~~Lin