Whoa.

Well... that was a shocker.

Intense with a very unique twist, nice I like it.

it's all that AND a bag of chips, mr. tim. but what's with the name Mack? that's like...weird. whatever.

great story, write more!

For some reason or another, this chapter scared me slightly less than the last.Good job.

“But I don’t want to be a man. And frankly, neither do you.”

that's a GREAT line!

Well, we can only hope that those people who used to leave comments telling you not to kill yourself and such have gone away for good.

This is much darker and dirtier than I'd expect from any of you.

EXCELLENT job.