mn. Yea...sure

hah, nice ^ ^. like i offered b4, i could b ur editor if u want u kno. there r a couple spelling errors, but otherwise, very good. i'll b waiting for the next chapter =D

Blue Yukiko

that's great u finally posted this ^ ^. please update soon

Blue Yukiko

Good job. Very detailed. The story already has a great and intense atmospehere surrounding it. I can't wait to hear more.