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Cookie Gestapo
2005-06-13
ch 1,
abuse"...You did this....You knew....Your pushed me....You put the knife to my wrist...You killed me."

I like how you use those to seperate the next verses.

Erm... That's all I can say about it really.
Unholy Haven
2005-03-29
ch 1,
abuseHi! I like the use of italics in this poem. Also, just thought I'd let you know that reading your personal profile gave me a laugh! It's cute!
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