This is really good. It's very real and I can't help but wonder if it isn't written about a real person. But it's applicable to everyone. I really like the wicked smile as you kiss part. I'm so glad this is a poem instead of a story. It makes it more universal.

I love the vivid imagery! Wonderfully wrriten!

hey! omgshh i love yer story(= hehe, some people might know why -ahem- it reminds me of someone i mean SOMETHING so familiar, haha, i mean its soo cool(= but yeah know, it is the powerr of scent(=

o0o0o very decriptive...hehe good job

oh wow, i really love this!! it's great!!

beautiful. transmits images of color and scent- i don't know how you do it, but it works. =3 great job.

Very poetic update as soon as you can

Thanks for the review! I know what you mean -_-; Anyways, I like this!

~Jade

I loved it! It was seemingly beautiful. It took me a while to check up on it, but now im glade I did. Great work!

nice, so I'm wondering, did he die or did he dump?