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| godspeed218 2008-10-12 ch 9,  | abuseOMG ! NO what are you thinking ! no no no ! NO NO NO ! poor matt... mm.. matt... my kind of man :) |
| godspeed218 2008-10-12 ch 4, | abuseomg... this is getting me hooked ! this is super good ! (y) |
| Guinivere Bloodgood 2007-10-21 ch 22, | abuseOh my ** god. I am bawling like a baby right now. This story was so intensely emotional, and the characters were all so deep. It was so full of twists and turns that it just keeps you guessing until the very end. I loved this story, and I'll probably read it several more times. |
| Back of Beyond 2006-11-19 ch 22, | abusethis story was really amazing, you deserve way more appreciation! great ending, even if i'm sad it's ended! :( |
| Kamijo - Lareine 2006-07-11 ch 22, | abuseLOVE this story! I'm happy to see that Matt and Alex have gotten back together. I've listed this and you in my Favorites. You're an awesome writer! |
| Storm December 2006-04-17 ch 22, | abuseI Love this story! You did a brilliant job with it! TTFN! ;) |
| bob 2005-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI found your style of writing very primitive. The characters aren't fully developed and this story barely grabs my attention.Sorry to be so harsh but i felt you needed to be told. All of your stories are written in a similar way, and if you don't improve now, you'll never become a creative writer. |
| Cherise 2005-09-26 ch 22, anon. | abuseThis one of the cutest yaoi stories that I've ever been priveledged to read!I absolutely loved that this wasnt all sunshine and daisies and the fact that there WAS a happy ending! Much adoration for you! |
| Kamiavee 2005-09-11 ch 22, | abusethe sweetest story I've ever read!!the sweetest!! : ' ]and I love the words 'forever'! |
| Dragonblade65 2005-06-29 ch 22, | abusewow. this is such a nice story! it was really really sad, it almost made me cry! but I loved the ending. Really loved it! |
| Antony At Last 2005-06-13 ch 22, | abuseOh my dear god! Allow me a moment of incoherency. That was by far the best gay singularly romance story I have ever read! Okay, and it had a good plot. I was expecting it to be so very cliched, but the whole Jayden thing suprised and pleased me. Thank god they got back together, becuase I was on the verge of tears. That is another thing, the emotional roller-coaster the reader experiences in this story is quite authentic. I must applaude you. Cheers! |
| Baka-Sensei 2005-06-07 ch 22, | abuseSQUA! This is wonderful! You are so good at writing fluffy, happy stories like this! It amazes me how you are able to change from tragedy to something like this so naturally! You are wonderfully talented. Keep up the good work! |
| ozumas girl 2005-05-21 ch 22, | abuse*Squealing* OH MY GOODNESS! This story ROCKED! I totally loved it!! Only really good fics make me all miffed and angry, making me want to pull the characte's out of the story and knock some sence into them ^ ^ I wanted to do that to Alex more times then I can count. lol. Anyway, I kinda skipped to the end to see who he ended up with... I would of been SO ** if he ended up with Jayden... I knew he was a prick when he entered the story. You did REALLY well! I loved this story! |
| Rob_4_eva 2005-05-20 ch 22, anon. | abuseOHH that's the best story I ever read! it was so sad at the first then in the end it turned out to be so great. omg i cried..i'll admit it. it was really sad at the first and i'm a really emotional person. i love this story! |
| Southern Gent 2005-05-05 ch 22, | abuseI really loved this story. Often, I have to read into it a good bit before I can really get into a story. I've never read a story like this one, though. So you had me from chapter one here. It was great. Unfortunately, my hard drive crashed about three months ago but I walked to the library just so I could read it. And that is really saying something. Wonderful job.Take care and BEZ |