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| faking closure 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseFaking Closure liked the flow of this poem. She liked the overall poem. It was very nice. There was colorful wording. Basically, it was very good. This review was written with the aid of harlequin wings because Faking Closure is doubleplusungood at reviews. My apologies. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseLove the repitition and the irony. Just wonderful. |
| CryNowLaughLater 2005-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the feel to this poem, being a small town girl myself it kinda hits home and i feel "safe" with this poem. I like this very much beautiful touch with the repetition of "...comes home to dread workhorses...". Nice job. Bravo! |
| shola 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad I took your advice.Rolls like a dried out old man's monologue in a crackling western. (that's a compliment, I promise) |
| TheSometimesTree 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseYou already know I like this. I just told you now. But guess what? I do like it. |
| ta1nt3d1uv 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI like it. |
| thosewhomustbecarried 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery impressive (understand this reaction is not exaggerated, this is the first good poem I've read in weeks on this site). I love the use of dialect, it's almost like a "bluesy" poem, and the repetition of "the come home to dread workhorses" - it sounds like one of those local sayings that doesn't mean exactly what it says, like it has localized meaning. Keep it up, cheers. |
| JenniRose 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. |
| boogalaga 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |