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| FallenSoldier15 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseIt was an awsome poem but the worst girlfriend. |
| DementedOracle 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is cute. I hope you don't mind me calling it that, I know I get really annoyed when people call my poems "cute", but it's just that I was thinking 8th grade love, and these words sent my imagination reeling. |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abusethe ending loses it's structure a little bit but this is so cute! i love the bits in the middle about melting and laughing too, it shows all the simple pleasures in life, nice, x weasel within x |
| deli-lise 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abusesweet. |
| SportylilChica 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAww so sweet and cute. Great job! |