Another wonderfully deep poem! What amazes me is the way you can make something so impressively deep, and on top of it it rhymes with such incredibility! Good job! Don't stop writing or I shall be greatly disappointed! :)

~PDW

Makes me think about a bit of my own stuff. It's good when words have this effect. Defenitely great!

Quite sad but I like it.

Building a wall between you and the person you used to love. Quite good.

Amazing.

The last stanza is so powerful.

Especially:

"Only on the other side

I won’t be there,

Let’s see if you finally

Begin to care."

Amazing writing.

The last stanza is amazing, quite an intense poem. keep it up.

Very nice. Rhymed very well, beautiful imagery, you know, the whole bit :D

Keep it up!-Lav

I wonder if who this was about understood the message. I hope so, it was a greatly conveyed one.

your work is just so wonderful. it always has emotional lines and touching stanzas. This is just beautiful and the rhyming is so fantastic.

this is a really good poem, i think it has wonderful flow.LadySolitaire

"I’ll escape away I’ll find away I’ll break away Just say" i love those lines they really speak to me so much...i love it...so beautifully written. lots of love ~AllyCred~

P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it.

I like the format you put it in and the words you chose. Wonderful poem!