*uses all the profanity he rememberes and taunts everyone reading his journal* all the time baby.

This is turning out really good. only, When I'm hit with the red dart, I most certainly would NOt go 'Oh not a red one!" I'd be something more like 'Oh, this'll be fun." or "I like the red ones."

I might add, I was very surprised to see the gender plays you have here. *chuckles* I want to start writing a story like this, or something. It's good.

o_O You never read the original thought of wings, it was something that happened to me, I have it on a journal somewhere, I could find it if you're curious.

woah... freaky. i like it! ^_^ and it's so suspensful too! *wonders what's happening to Grace, Damion, and Hitaki* UPDATE SOON PLEASE! XD

Oh my god. I should not have eatten before reading that. It is so scary how good you are at writing about torture in the name of science. I am very scared. And very hooked.

I read all of it... the other night, I think. And I've been thinking about it all day. *can't wait for the next chapter*

excellent building up chapter the way you reveal the information is very intriguing.

I like your characters, I like the plot so far, and I am eager to find out what's going on with those peoples. Anyway, I'm really liking this story.

This sounds great. I can't wait to find out what these doctors are doing to the kids.

Absolutely superb. Keep up the good work. Although the ending of the first chapter was slightly cliche, it was still an excellent follow-up on the "reports"

i love this so far. it rather reminds me of the way i think and write when i have breakdowns. i also like how you give just a hint of whats to come and what has happened. can't wait to read more eh.