Yes, brief & bleached are good terms here. I will pick though - the description of Aphrodite/Zephyr confused me - I thought at first that you were describing the person he wanted to bring back. Took a bit for me to correct myself there. Other than that I actually liked this quite well. It's consise, paints itself well, no strings.

I actually didn't mind the way it was written because I've read all the Seth stories, but it would probably make an all around better story if it was "beefed up." Other than that, though, I liked the concept and thought it was highly entertaining. Much better than writing my own stuff for my stupid yearbook. Lol.

happy hunting,Midnight Predator