 eshlie 2008-08-31 . chapter 1The best poem ever. |
 NumblesTheAuthor 2005-05-10 . chapter 1omg that was so so so great! i love how it's from another person's perspective (actually your narrator sounded alot like my mom...) anywayz keep up the good work! |
 The-unimportant-item 2005-04-11 . chapter 1wow. I really like this one as well... I know how you feel. I wrote a poem like this one, actually... but I think this is definitely better than mine.
~The-unimportant-item |
 Alexz Lynn 2005-04-10 . chapter 1I think you have perfectly summed up what every girl thinks is being whispered about them. And some times it really is. Very good work indeed. ~ Alexz Lynn |
 Aslan Israel 2005-03-31 . chapter 1gosh I know how you feel. Society sucks like that. but in the end, it seems to me all the so-called perfect looking people are the most shallow. I find that it's the rest of us who are the most interesting. |
 underminingfaith 2005-03-31 . chapter 1This poem hit me really hard - makes me think of all the times one of my classmates were teased for being fat. |
 kp silent 2005-03-30 . chapter 1 Just a we bit on the harsh side. I heart it. Who ever you, are you rock. Keep on keep'in on kay? |
 Mettie 2005-03-30 . chapter 1Wow - thanks for all the reviews! I was so wonderfully surprised to receive them all! I've had a bad day and you've just completely turned it around! :D Oh, I just love this poem - it says all of the things I so very often think and yet it shows them an exaggerated light to show the ridiculousness of it all! Very well done! Keep up the good work! ~*Mettie*~ |
 Nelson Wells 2005-03-29 . chapter 1Very good. Perfect rhythm. It's very sad, but it brings up a good point about being made fun of. |
 Luneko 2005-03-29 . chapter 1Fine! Just make me cry, why don't you! Hahaha! Just kidding. But I really like the humorous feel that the rhyme and rhythm lend to the poem. |