this is powerful...whoa

oh...my...god... thats awesome! so cool!

~luvs from the lil vampire on the funeral pyre~

The first stanzas were, to me, very reminiscent of the Avril song "Nobody's Home". In a good way. Abortion/miscarriage concept presented in the second stanza are very poignant. Nice, depressing, ending. Keep writing, your very good-Jack

Oh wow. Another beautiful piece! I like the rhythm and flow. I feel like this girl sometimes in my life...-sigh- thank u for sharing =)

i might be becoming a quick fan of yours. kind of a bit delicate subject here (overused and overrated) and i like the way you portrayed it. nice job.