MY GOD! You know how to write!
BEST STORY OF MY LIFE. Post the next chapter. Please. Please. Please. Oh My God. I need it.

wow, his life sucks

Um... I reallu like it so far, and I'd love an update... plz?

AWESOME! Yeah, I have school too, hope you still get the next chapter up soon! This story seesm to be really od!!
Lee

please update the story.

>> I know I already reviewed for this... but I see an update has not been done in months. Well I demand one. >> You heard me. Demand. I expect an update soon. >O Or I send crazed chinchillas at you!! ; ; Please?

Aw omg. Please keep this up its really good and i cant wait to see where its going!

i wanna know more about the poor kid who accidentally cut his wrist. that sounded painful. ow.. >_< yeah. the stripper guy is lame. i think. but oh well. i like your use of language. kekes. its nice.

morbid, but very compelling and fascinating. haha. i'm using words i read from book reviews at the back of books. lol. uh anyway, its true. like your writing. ^^ its a very fresh approach to a pretty well-used theme.

maxwell-sama! ok. here it is. i am with holding a tiny chapter of a new story i wrote and i won't post it until you update! ha ha ha! i think i might finally have a plan. actually i probably will post it anyway, but i'm ptretending i won't put it up until you update.heh heh heh

maxwell-sama! are you trying to kill me?! i am adicted to this story and you haven't updated for like 50 billion years! please please please update... *uses cute little innocent face* please?

This is an awesome story so far!! PLEASE update? *puppy eyes*

~Ayame

I ask you to update soon...please...Why'd you leave it off there? Of all places...

Nice beginning. I liked this a lot!

I like it!It's so great! Really interesting characters!You must update! PLEASE! :D