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| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-05-07 ch 2,  | abuseplease update the story. |
| Sheepie 2006-11-16 ch 2, | abuse>> I know I already reviewed for this... but I see an update has not been done in months. Well I demand one. >> You heard me. Demand. I expect an update soon. >O Or I send crazed chinchillas at you!! ; ; Please? |
| firestar267 2006-11-13 ch 2, | abuseAw omg. Please keep this up its really good and i cant wait to see where its going! |
| zakei 2006-10-19 ch 2, | abusei wanna know more about the poor kid who accidentally cut his wrist. that sounded painful. ow.. >_< yeah. the stripper guy is lame. i think. but oh well. i like your use of language. kekes. its nice. |
| zakei 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abusemorbid, but very compelling and fascinating. haha. i'm using words i read from book reviews at the back of books. lol. uh anyway, its true. like your writing. ^^ its a very fresh approach to a pretty well-used theme. |
| kid in the closet 2006-07-17 ch 2, | abusemaxwell-sama! ok. here it is. i am with holding a tiny chapter of a new story i wrote and i won't post it until you update! ha ha ha! i think i might finally have a plan. actually i probably will post it anyway, but i'm ptretending i won't put it up until you update.heh heh heh |
| kid in the closet 2006-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abusemaxwell-sama! are you trying to kill me?! i am adicted to this story and you haven't updated for like 50 billion years! please please please update... *uses cute little innocent face* please? |
| NekozawaUmehito 2006-05-15 ch 2, | abuseThis is an awesome story so far!! PLEASE update? *puppy eyes* ~Ayame |
| Shonen Nagasaki 2006-04-16 ch 2, | abuseI ask you to update soon...please...Why'd you leave it off there? Of all places... |
| Limited Edition 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseNice beginning. I liked this a lot! |
| ddz008 2006-01-17 ch 2, | abuseI like it!It's so great! Really interesting characters!You must update! PLEASE! :D |
| Willow Bane 2005-12-19 ch 2, | abuseGOD I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR EVER FOR YOU TO UPDATE THIS STORY! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU? |
| Hanel 2005-11-28 ch 2, | abusePoor kid...you'd think people would go easy on a poor little pretty boy. Apparently not...ahahaha. Keep up the good writing! |
| Hanel 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseThis looks very promising. Not too much about the characters yet, but I like them already. :) My only little qualm is the copyright symbols you have after the certain brands... I don't think it's quite necessary. It's not a big thing, but just jumps out when you're reading the line. Otherwise, very nice story-telling. Moving onto next chapter! |
| Arkvionsun 2005-10-25 ch 2, | abusei love your story i like all of your work i had been reading it for awhile and i love it ^-^ well keep up the good work |