I just love this poem. The words were very touching, and I hope that your friend is doing better with her cancer. The poem needs a little touching up for the flow of the words; altogether the poem is very beautiful

thats very sad. id hate to lose one of my freinds. i hope things turn out well for her! -DragonsDream

Wow. This is truly beautiful. Enjoy the time the two of you can share while you have it together, and live without regrets. Very nice job on this, though you might want to space it out differently, so that it can be more pleasing to the eye. Best of wishes to you and your friend. ~Karma Chameleon

That was beautiful. I'm so sorry about your friend, I can't imagine what it would be like to lose one of mine. I hope she gets better. Nice job, beautiful poem.

~Mlle. Daae