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| onewhoknits 2008-06-04 ch 1,   | Wow. That's good. |
| fairytale failure 2006-10-10 ch 1, | That's a beautiful poem, really an interesting cncept, how she has a more worthy cause every time she dances...or so I interpret it. I think you should add an extra space whenever she goes to a new age to make it more clear. |
| Tempest Breeze 2005-03-29 ch 1, | really interesting, i like it |
| Mlle. Daae 2005-03-29 ch 1, | Wow. I don't dance, but if I did I'm sure I would love this poem even more than I already do...which is a bit hard. It was beautiful, like watching life fly by in mere seconds. Nice job, I'd love to read more of your work! ~Mlle. Daae |
| darkmistresslae 2005-03-29 ch 1, | beautiful poem, truly is, I really enjoyed reading it |