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Manuel Fajar 2005-03-31 . chapter 1
Inside clear space of time machine rolls on,

A purpose once known to Gods infinite,

Is lost to mortals with their finite views,—

To peer upon this complex functioning,

Is but a glimpse of what all wonders be,

Binary stars pulsing wildly neutrons,

Quanta interacting with our pressures,

Chromatic flowers,—gas nebuli red,

This touch that spreads from fingers to my lips,

This taste that brings nutmeg from tropic lands,

This smell that chocolate and almonds spreads,

This sight such revelry of spectrum's light,

This sound delighting arpeggio curves,

We jumble and believe it synchronized,

Though puzzle that we sense in dribs & drabs.
simpleplan13 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
interesting
clairvaux 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
*Uberglomps* I understand it!

Albino ravens - things that are not what they should beBlizzard's eye - occurences that should not hapenSobbing hyenas - regret for happinessTumbleweed among the action - watching the lives of others

Translation: The persona is feeling strange and reflecting while absentmindedly doing this during a big event.

Er...right. Yes I'm weird.

.:.Diff.:.
Whisper on the Lips 2005-03-29 . chapter 1
Sounds to me, like Set has knocked on your door. He is egyptian god of chaos. I like the randomness, it is very unique,and i'm sure this is extremely thought provoking, But at first glance it ...beautiful! I like your profile, and happy to be one oof your fave authors SMILE ON!

(cows)
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-29 . chapter 1
Very random, but randomness is great!
Made in U.S.A. 2005-03-29 . chapter 1
interesting...um i don't really know what to say but i don't mean it in a bad way really i like this as well though its alot different from your others. creative and yes as i said before interesting. keep writing :D
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