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| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-03 ch 1,   | Beautiful. I know how you feel, to hae everything seem like nothing, be reduced to nothing. It is one of the worst feelings in your life to have that. But still the poem flows together nicely and the emotion is raw. Keep it up. |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-03-31 ch 1, | this is such a great poem, i love everything about this, especially the end... it kinda shocked me a bit, great flow going on here, have to add you to my faves *click* x weasel within x |
| SagaciousPnay 2005-03-30 ch 1, | I have felt these feelings before and still do. You're definately not alone. Splendid job on the poem. |
| Simply Stupid 2005-03-30 ch 1, | Me too. Chin up. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-03-30 ch 1, | this is so sad, the ending is ironic! It totally caught me off guard. I'm sorry to hear what had happened to you, I hope you feel better. Oh, and thank you for the reviews. ~Rueben~ |
| A.Solitaire 2005-03-30 ch 1, | Amazing, i love this poem, you put it together wonderfully and it has excellent flow. keep it upSolo |
| Thoughtless-blazer 2005-03-30 ch 1, | wibderful. pretty cool plot and idea. great way to go with this. |