oh cool idea! i love this idea! i like it when people can break away from topics that can be so cliched, like a heartbreak, so i really like this one, good job on it and a great ending x weasel within x

I usually avoid poetry like the devil avoids a church, and I only read this so I could say thanks for the kind review of "Closure". However, I found this very deep and sad. It was surprising to see how you could express such emotion with so few words. Great job, keep writing.

**Slave**

This is an awesome poem! It's totally one of my favorites. Keep up with the fabulous writings! : )

Aw great poem! Beautiful words. Awsome images and metaphors. In case you couldn't tell I really liked it. Great poem! Keep it up!

love makes us do crazy things, I think I've read this poem every time I go on this site. Nice themes: love=cookiness, masks, love... but can't you convey your feelings any more origionally? Otherwise, you rock, nice profile. Rock on!-Marguerite