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| Trinity Limit 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abuseLovely poem. It's meaning goes deeper than it seems at first, but with some thinking one understands the deeper message. Your beautiful choice of words made the poem very enjoyable to read also. A job well done. Keep it up. ~Trinity |
| Bong2 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem and it is well written. I know exactly what you mean. I see some writers with 15 reviews and be like wow and another author with 0. It makes you wonder, "Why do we even bother to express ourselves through poetry?" Answer-->You said "You [the reader] breathe them in and out like air." Although we take it for granted we need the "air" to survive... I know I do...Keep on Writing. Poetically Yours, B. Rosser |
| Neaera 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseo!...that's sad...but i do like it. ;-) |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseaw... love letters~~ so sweet^^ i hope it all works out~~ keep writing! |