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Reviews For: The opening for my horror story
Lellida 2005-05-04 . chapter 1
The line about the tangled fingers and the ginger ale is good, but you should really expand this story. Then you'd win 1st place!
anon. 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
not very interesting
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