Reviews for Waiting On The Edge

life like whoa 2005-04-04 ch 1,	I like this one, not your best but still good!
Zephyr Zaelza 2005-04-02 ch 1,	Oh my god that was simply amazing, the way you got everything to rhyme, and the words and descriptions you used! wow, I especially loved the lines, "just for once...I wish I was me; and I've always been a step too late, and they say you choose your fate" just wow, you're amazing! ;) -Zephyr Zaelza
NotA-Frayed 2005-03-30 ch 1,	Ok, this is really, really good. I love the way it manages (though only slightly) to keep its seriousness with the ryme pattern. There is one little thing. Many people end this kind of poem with ..., but it gives the same effect to use a period. The advantage to a sinlge period is it looks much better. Though the ryhmes are very good, and not cheesy at all, sometimes a 1,1,2,2,3,3, ect ryhme pattern gets a little fake, or silly sounding. But, for the style, it was amazing. I love its straightforward and yet subtle feeling. Good job!
His Only 2005-03-30 ch 1,	OMGOSH! Again you have written a beautiful poem! This one was so sad and depressing, filled with LOTS of emotion. You are really good at getting what you feel inside down on paper and comparing it with real life things. I'll never know how you do it! Great job and may God Bless!