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epic awesomeness. I can't wait to read more of this story~!

Almost anticlimactic. I love the title: Discourse, very diplomatic. Actually any more action would probably ended the story with Kier and Adrian being killed, we don't want that

I was surprised with how quickly everyone regained their calm. Now I'm waiting to see if Adrian will ask Jier about that story.

Great last chapters!! Sorry for not being reviewing! :) School has been kind of hectic and just today (I got this day and tomorrow free!) I got time to read the eight chapters I haven't read. And I love them... specially now that they now that the king is the one doing things to get the nobles sick and that The First Companion is warning Kier and telling him the truth about Wyn's death. And I hate that Sclava (not Tara)... he is sure a manipulative woman and I kind of feel that she got what he wanted in that lunch... and I really hope that Adrian can listen to what Kier's have to say. They love each other so much after all! T__T And I also hate the King... I imagine (or maybe is just my hate talking) that he killed Rafe! Hope you update soon! (I have already read Chapter 12 but it sometimes work and sometimes doesn't)

Update soon, please!

I've been reading all through this series over the past few days. It's gripping, with good characters and interesting world-building. I look forward to reading more of it!

I've just finished reading all three books and I'm very interested to read more. I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ It's been very interesting and enjoyable. I look forward to more!

I'd like to see the missing scene! ^_^

This is too complicated for my feeble brain to even postulate what has happened/might happen. For some reason I think that Pedr is to be trusted, because he knew what reaction he might face, yet he still did it. Also because Fourth knew Adrian.
And because I don't like either of the two women.
The last sentence of chapter, that's Kier and the guards' rxn to him?

I forced myself to wait until I'd caught up in Dichotomy before reviewing, and here I am. But what a place to stop! Both Keir and Adrian in trouble, in Odran's palace, with Odran's companions, no less.
You have created a world full of characters both beautiful for their diversity and believable for their faults. I am again hooked on fantasy fics, finally rescued from the cliché monotony that so often plagues the genre. You've managed romance without smut (well, a little smut, but who would deny us that?)* and the expert development of both larger plots and subplots neither drawn out or too condensed. Keep up the great work.
And now get busy writing!!

*which reminds me to beg for the missing scene. Please put in their first night at the castle! Your adoring fans are currently sitting bored at home, waiting for the advent of such a lovely addition to your story... In short as well as translated, we're waiting for a scene that will melt our brians into goo with passion hotter than Adrian's fire powers... If you add the scene, I promise to lay off the crap comparisons. Scout's honor.
Yikes, I'll shut up now.

Ouch, I wonder if the king orchestrated the whole thing. Anyway Kier and Adrian are going to be in deep trouble.

Uh-oh...

Uh oh. All a trap to get Kier under the king's control? :o

I smell a conspiracy~

I hope that they don't fall into whatever trap has been laid.

Oh crap! Update soon!

Seems like Kier walked straight into that trap. He let down his shields protecting him and Adrian, and attacked one of the King's Companions. How's he gonna protect Adrian if he's in jail? Does Adrian get sent to jail with him? Your story is great as always and I appreciate all the hard work. :) Update as soon as you can.