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| andy 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abusethis inspires me for a picture *turns around and starts drawing* hehehe...>D |
| Oriamus Amadeus 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of the kind of thing I'd write, actually... Also makes me think of 'The Battle of Evermore' by Led Zeppelin, by the wording. Anyway, how I would interpret this is that this confined life is too much. You wish so desparately to be free of regret that you would die for salvation. The best line I think: 'Darkness falls in evermore, clings to my wings, they tore.' Cleverly put together and concise. I can establish a meaning easily, even if the author herself has a difficult time in remembering... XD |
| Adonia Chesser 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseit's cool, I liked it alot, I like your work. |
| life like whoa 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really enjoyed this one!! The last two lines are my absolute fave's! |
| Zephyr Zaelza 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abusewow another amazing poem! I think you were describing confusion in this one, when you have no idea what to do anymore, and when you feel like every wall is closing is about you. You put a lot of emotions into this one, and they're very apparent; fear, confusion, death. I loved it. Keep writing! -Zephyr Zaelza |
| His Only 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was all dark and mysterious but veryy nicely written! I felt like I was reading somethin out of a book or magazine. Excellent job with this! |