|Reviews for An Apple a Day|
| poetic abortion 4/11/05 . chapter 1
XD The format is great as always, your cleverness with words never fails to amaze me. - just put the apple donw! xP
!* Noelle *!
| Cloud Burst 4/3/05 . chapter 1
lol, interesting how u can make so much out of just eating an apple eh? great poem! -
| philoslove 4/1/05 . chapter 1
I liked the idea of the core being a twisted skeleton. I never thought of it that way. I was expecting some worms in this, but anyway, I liked the expression "juicy clear blood gugled and flowed", gosh, I could almost feel pure apple juice sliding down my throat. It also reminded me of the new DKNY perfume, the apple one. Ah, the bombardment of advertisements.
| Sapphire-Eyes67 3/31/05 . chapter 1
Meep. That's a rather terrifying way of looking at it. I don't think I shall ever eat apples the same way again. You've really got talent to take something so simple and change it around so much!
| simpleplan13 3/31/05 . chapter 1
| monkey 3/31/05 . chapter 1
right... *backs away slowly* put the apple down...
| TheAngelofhope 3/30/05 . chapter 1
"thoughtabout" you forgot to space. This was nice. Now I want an apple. :)