XD The format is great as always, your cleverness with words never fails to amaze me. - just put the apple donw! xP

!* Noelle *!

lol, interesting how u can make so much out of just eating an apple eh? great poem! -

I liked the idea of the core being a twisted skeleton. I never thought of it that way. I was expecting some worms in this, but anyway, I liked the expression "juicy clear blood gugled and flowed", gosh, I could almost feel pure apple juice sliding down my throat. It also reminded me of the new DKNY perfume, the apple one. Ah, the bombardment of advertisements.

Oh!

Meep. That's a rather terrifying way of looking at it. I don't think I shall ever eat apples the same way again. You've really got talent to take something so simple and change it around so much!

wow.. powerful

right... *backs away slowly* put the apple down...

"thoughtabout" you forgot to space. This was nice. Now I want an apple. :)