Cute, Catchy and to the point. Mysterious, 'who is this girl?' 'Is she loney?' Very nice!

This is almost cute, yet somewhat depressing.

This is really poignant...its so, what's the word I'm looking for? Beat-nik. I could hear, like...bongos in the background and stuff.

Cool beans! I love these three lines:

"Maybe the water contains your sorrow Of living every today and tomorrow Working with mops..."

I mean, those lines are great! Good job!

~CR