this is a continuation frm my previous review - you should really let people send annoymous reviews. i think you got a couple of nasty reviews... i also got one just a few days ago, and damn! it was real insulting! anyway just don't give up, you'll just waste your talent. To be gifted means that you've been blessed by God to have this special ability to do a special thing - such as writing stories and poems that can draw your readers into different worlds and realities. And to be talented means that you have what it takes to improve you gift so it becomes even better. Everyone is gifted and talented - so are YOU, all you need to know is where to find it and what to do. and just by reading a few of your writing articals i know you have a real gift for it!! as regards to this poem, its good. to me it sounded like one of those spoilers to some kind of action/fantasy movie or book. but the thing is that you actually had gotten me intrested however it was just a poem so the rest is up to my very wacky imagination to think up the rest.

DONT STOP WRITING!!

interesting...so who is he? j/k ;P...anyway nice poem

Oh wow...awsome!!