Beautiful. Your outer cloak of unimportance belies a rare gift for picturesque emotions described in flowing verses. Well done.

Loved it! Are we not all hopeless dreamers.

Sorry I'm reviewing this late -- I've been kinda out of it recently. SATs and ACTs and APs, all of which will make sense to any American high school students. They all translate to "pure evil".

I like the floaty sort of rhythm here. It sounds so soft and sweet, with a hint of gentle sadness at the end. It seems to me like a lovely childhood with the awareness that it will draw to a close sometime in the future. Kind of like Peter Pan. Though that book made me a little depressed. Your poem doesn't make me depressed -- it leaves me with a calm, content feeling.

I really liked this one. Truly wonderful.

~The-unimportant-item

You've taken me back to a time when I was young and lived in a magical kingdom...it was of course all in my imagination. Good work. No forced words, or anything. Keep up the good work! ~ Alexz Lynn

I love the simple rhythm - it makes it seem almost like a song.Doesn't everybody dream of a place like that?

Sweet! I wrote a poem very similar to this when I first began writing but it was no where near as well written or creative. Very good job, I loved it.

So been there. Really see where your coming from. Real good word choice on your part. Fave line = " My heart is never lonly there, yet no one's there but me.Good job

hmm we all need a place to just burrow and think outside ourselves where noone judges or remarks...anyway nice poem

Wonderful. Flowed perfectly. Brava!

Aw, this is so beautiful! Thanks for the shoutout! :) The rhythm's slightly different in "There I can be as wise as time," but otherwise, not a single mistake could I find! (And I want to be an editor when I get older!) No, this truly was fabulous and just opens my heart and my mind back to the simpler worlds of the imagination... Oh, to live there all the time! Still, you've done an excellent job - not just taking words with specific denotations and arranging them into a certain meter - but expressing a tone throughout the entire poem that appeals to the innocence of our dreams. Wonderfully done! Keep Writin'! ~*Mettie*~