interesting...deep...good...i like.

wah! whats with the sad poems? um... hypocritical of me, I have written 2 happy poems in my poetry career...

Another pristine example of your poetic capabilities. "She's not frowning-/just smile deprived" is brilliant!! The use of conflicting emotions is both familiar and new at the same time-Jack

I feel just the same as this girl. I especially like the ending! It was short and simple to read. Thanx for sharing! It's nice 2 know ppl. feel the same way as i do =)

i like this, love the idea. I love the rhyme scheme and the flow. Another great poem.

A very nifty poem. It reads and flows easily, I love it. The ending was great, Smile deprived, just perfect. Good job!