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| AngelBabyWingz85 2005-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseMost people always just let their life pass. They get killed at a young age, or die with regrets! |
| andy 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseis this about any particular person? it was kinda refreshing, not really whiney, i like it :D |
| life like whoa 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThe flow in this poem is amazingly written, I love this one dearly! You did so well, and I love how your saying to live your life because so many people aren't and it's passing so quickly! Very well done!! *claps* |
| K. L. Kirby 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseit is good, and i no i should not critisize for i am not as good as you, but it sounds like u were on to something, but gave up on accomplishing it. well keep up the good work. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseVery pleasant, although you give that person much power in controlling you. I suppose that is how people feel at times when in love, although dictating emotion is quite far... lol. Nah, I kid you. Love is lovely *blinks* Perhaps I am tired and know not what I'm saying... |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abusei can relate.. great job.. very nice poem.. tahnks for your review! |
| Zephyr Zaelza 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was beautiful...I loved it :) Keep it up!-Zephyr Zaelza |
| His Only 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOo! Another poem! This wone was really sweet, although again maybe a little too mushy for my tastes. But hey everybodys different. I liked how you explained the many parts this guy plays. It was really cute. And you have a REALLY good ending line. I loved it! "Everyone has a chance- and it's your turn." Great job with this! Keep writing. Catch you later. And God Bless! |