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Reviews For: Paradisio

melody mama 2005-04-15 ch 1,	abuseAs always, an awesome write from the great Red. But you're right, this is far different from anything else you have ever written. What led you to this? You know me, this is much more my forte, very real, trueful, doens't hide from reality. But I am curious, what led to the French setting. That was a little random. Oh, and I love hoe you quoted Mr. McClure in your bio. He would be so touched, hahaha. Oh, and I did not get the title.
Daddy 2005-04-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseCandace, I loved your story. It shows real development in your ability to write. I like that you worked hard at realistically portraying a setting and a miliue with which you are cetainly not very familiar. Impressive. I thought the story was a bit Hemingwayesque--and you'll have to read some Hemingway to see where that comes from. I'm proud that you write, that you do it so well, and that you're committed to it. You are a writer--which is something a lot of people wish they could say about themselves. It takes courage and commitment, and you have ample amounts of both.
Lost in the Funhouse 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abuseThe title makes sense, most definetely. A bar is probably not a place you would expect to understand such things that Gabrielle understood, and that's how I think the title fits in (Sounds kind of strange but it makes sense to me.) Once again, another great story! Keep up the great writing. I can't wait to read more of your stories
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-02 ch 1,	abuseThe title makes sense to me. And to my opinion, I really like the story so far. has a great catching beginning. I'm sure things will flow smoothly. Great work on a great start!
ecochick13 2005-03-30 ch 1,	abuseI liked this piece, it was well-written and had issues that almost everyone faces in life. It's also about the fall of people who have earned nothing on their own, but expect so much because of all they've been given. Well done. As far as the title goes, no offense, but it makes no sense at all. A bar is not the place I picture when I think paradise, but it might work for the song.

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