Ha ha ha! That was a damn funny story you have there. You really have knack for homour, huh? Anyway, you really did well in balancing the humor with action. Good for you! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that you'll really update this soon and regularly. It will be a treat for me, trust me! ^^

P.S: I'm not trying to pressure you or something like that, but I really sorta miss your wonderful reviews for COA. I know you may be busy or something like that. Still, I really hope that you'll start reviewing again and I assure you that there will be a new major character in the next chapter... ^^

I am really tired but I will make the effort to review this before my eyes close.Brilliant line: "Curse them and their nontax-deductible caffeine addiction! In retrospect, it probably hadn't been such a good idea to 'test' the rocket launcher..."

okay, you should mention the existence of the river before the 'submarine mode' thing, because it took me a while to get it. either that, or i am slow

what obvious changes? i hate to be stereotypical, but this is a 'guy' fic, and guys like technical descriptions

'Vell, vell, vell, vat do ve have here?'- LOVE THE ACCENT!

Aha-ha-haha!"- the evil laugh? even though it has no meaning at all, you COULD mention that he laughed evilly, or cackled, because that conforms to the stereotype...

And if your trap was so ingenious, then how do you explain my escape?"- wonderful! i salute your wit and sense of humour!

Vincent curled his lip at the hulking blonde man's tacky use of third person - two things- curled his lip scornfully??and haha tacky use :) yes our german friend is rather arrogant, isn't he?

For some reason I kept hearing the GET SMART theme music while I read this.

torture of Herr Gustov could have--and should have--gone on much longer- i agree, trture is good!

Just because I look like I should be stuffed in a cubicle- good line, but why?

hahaha M is so brilliantly cruel.

I was pleasantly surprised by this piece, as it is in a completely different style to your other stories, and I think that you did it well. You do not usually include *much* humour in your stories, but this showed a matured humour writing style with a good action;description balance. And that goes for you as well, Yimzy, whoever wants the credit can have it.

Ha, that was great! Hilarious, and I like the new ending, too. I also liked the car - wish I had one like it.

i loved it! hehehe

Ayiik this was fun. Very cute, it really was a good combination of Tally/James traits! I liked the ending especially, I hope Jonothan gets sent with him to Mongolia! I really needed this... thank you!