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| beti213 2005-04-25 ch 1, | cute. I would watch the seventh line-who's gazing about?- but otherwise, great imagery and easy to follow. good job. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-31 ch 1, | I liked your descriptions- my favorite line "the photographs, yes I burned." good job! |