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| dolly-dear 2006-12-26 ch 2,  | abuseVery nice companion to Vicarious Pain, can't wait for more! |
| Liviania 2006-05-27 ch 2, | abuseInteresting-seeing things from Karayan's POV illuminates a lot. Livi |
| Damian E L 2005-04-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh, so he does have a soft spot. I really think I like this guy. |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-04-10 ch 2, | abuseI find it ironic, that Karayan calls Valcourt a sadist. Wonderful chapter, update soon! |
| MooseDeEvita 2005-04-07 ch 2, | abuseOh, this is too wonderful! I love his constant struggle with power. the part at the end almost seemed like mercy killing, except for the fact I doubt he'd do that. Simply amazing, you are |
| FeelBeyondWords 2005-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI thought I'd take a look, but I couldn't stop. I just had to continue reading. Amazing writing. Simply outstanding. |
| Hannah Montgomery 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseHoly wow. This is exciting. |
| MooseDeEvita 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abusewow, you simply are amazing at writing, which by now you should be aware |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseArum is not dead inside. I think he has a way to shield his mind, or something, but he's not dead. I might be wrong, but I think his name kinda shows it, in a way. It means clever, and I think that it shows he's hiding something. I don't think you mentioned what's his psychic ability is, but I might have just overlooked it. |
| d'Neronique 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseKarayan is my new favorite creepy guy. |