 dolly-dear 2006-12-26 . chapter 2Very nice companion to Vicarious Pain, can't wait for more! |
 Liviania 2006-05-27 . chapter 2Interesting-seeing things from Karayan's POV illuminates a lot.
Livi |
 Damian E L 2005-04-22 . chapter 2 Oh, so he does have a soft spot. I really think I like this guy. |
 Naomi Schemer 2005-04-10 . chapter 2I find it ironic, that Karayan calls Valcourt a sadist. Wonderful chapter, update soon! |
 MooseDeEvita 2005-04-07 . chapter 2Oh, this is too wonderful! I love his constant struggle with power. the part at the end almost seemed like mercy killing, except for the fact I doubt he'd do that. Simply amazing, you are |
 FeelBeyondWords 2005-04-01 . chapter 1I thought I'd take a look, but I couldn't stop. I just had to continue reading. Amazing writing. Simply outstanding. |
 Hannah Montgomery 2005-03-31 . chapter 1Holy wow. This is exciting. |
 MooseDeEvita 2005-03-31 . chapter 1wow, you simply are amazing at writing, which by now you should be aware |
 Naomi Schemer 2005-03-31 . chapter 1Arum is not dead inside. I think he has a way to shield his mind, or something, but he's not dead. I might be wrong, but I think his name kinda shows it, in a way. It means clever, and I think that it shows he's hiding something. I don't think you mentioned what's his psychic ability is, but I might have just overlooked it. |
 d'Neronique 2005-03-31 . chapter 1Karayan is my new favorite creepy guy. |