ShadowofDemise
2005-03-31
ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was a fresh read. It's beautifully tragic. The concept is great, I like the fact you made the male character express resentful emotions. Was she murdered? Did she commit suicide? (I’m thinking the latter of the two) I don't expect an answer. I like the mystery in that. It was short and tragically sweet. The fact that you thought of burning a house to rid of a ghost is genius. Then the afterthought of that action is even more tragic to think of a ghost haunting the remains of what used to be her home, I can see a mental image of the ashes, and wreckage, and you’ve let my mind wander now with this short story. Very wonderful! |
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