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| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseIt was a little vague in the beginning. Really mysterious but I feel it is a little underdeve3loped. If you are going to continue this, I hope you tell us more aobut the world. |
| labonnemascarade 2005-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehannie, update this one soon too, cause i likes it. Please! -Lina |
| Magdalen13 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThat's a great beginning... I really want to know what happened! And where are her friends? :-) I like what you have created so far, update soon. |
| Angelfish 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseGood so far! Please update soon! |
| Sasuya 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... I'll be waiting for a new chapter! |