 Sally-andersonn 2005-09-28 . chapter 1It was a little vague in the beginning. Really mysterious but I feel it is a little underdeve3loped. If you are going to continue this, I hope you tell us more aobut the world. |
 labonnemascarade 2005-05-03 . chapter 1 hannie, update this one soon too, cause i likes it. Please! -Lina |
 Magdalen13 2005-04-03 . chapter 1That's a great beginning... I really want to know what happened! And where are her friends? :-) I like what you have created so far, update soon. |
 Angelfish 2005-04-02 . chapter 1Good so far! Please update soon! |
 Sasuya 2005-03-31 . chapter 1Interesting... I'll be waiting for a new chapter! |