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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-04-30 ch 1,  | abusewow, great rhythm here, really like this one, nice rhyme too, not too forced, i love the "all-alone" part,x weasel within x |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. At the start it make me think of the saying "two wrongs don't make a right, but they sure make you even." I love this poem, it has a happy ending. Keep it up. |
| SagaciousPnay 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery inspirational! I like how this poem raises a smile over that frown. SWEET job! |
| A.solitaire 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuselooks like you have made a couple friends out there, well, i dont blame them, this poems kicks **. Keep it up*Solo |
| Arutha 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOh hell yeah! Now that's a good poem. I love it when I find people (or they find me... you just never know ;P) on this site who really have a grasp of putting words together in a way that not only flows well, but sounds eloquent at the same time. Bravo back at ya. Oh, and your account description cracks me up, haha. "especially from the likes of you"... I know you love me already, so I don't take any offense ;P Awesome smawesome poem; keep it up. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseaw... i noe how it feels to be inspired^^ the best feeling in the world~~ Great job on this!! keep writing! |
| Riely Marie 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThat's very good. I felt like that when I got my first kiss... god was it a disaster |