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| BoMbShELL 2006-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseamazing...once again...knwo the feeling...love the line..."There is no hell like a woman’s scorn"...there just simply isn't...~DM |
| unspecified 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abusewow. you are amazing. you ca really relate to the feeling in your writing.. i've been there, i've been through that, and It's like you took the words right out of my mind. it's amazing check out some of my stuff, u should read, are you thinking of me love, me... KEEP WRITING |
| BrokenandBeautiful 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I love it! you did a very great, amazing, fantastical job! I can relate so much. WOW that is all i can say WOW. I love it! Keep writing!luvs me |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseAin't that a killa!=P Very discouraging and expressing in its frustration and disappointment. Its nice, thnx for sharing. |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! That was very well done. I liked the subject, language, everything! Congrats, you have offically made it on my favourite authors list(hasn't that just made your day?) Seriously, though, I really loved that.Luv Kait. |
| Lucy Grace 2005-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI understand totally. What a moron! Really cool poem, though. Lol. Write more. |
| Annarence Studio 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, especially the intro lines. But to me i think the rhythm of each line is perhaps too short, and slow down the general pace of the poem. |
| mage o' bacon 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abusemeh. boys suck. trow rocks at them and squish them so they die. i actually think there's a club out there... |
| Insanity Is Not A Crime 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abusewow. ur so passionate. its really just...beautiful, even if its dark, but who ever said that was a bad thing? and i do know where ur coming from and damn id love to clock the guy. urs and mine :P but wow to teh writing! |
| Rivolta Silenziosa 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseWow. You are one of the few people I know who can really incorporate their feelings into a story or a poem. Good work. Almost made me cry and really made me want to kill him. Pity I don't know where he lives. ^^~DM |
| Ethereal Gale 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's awful! It's amazing poem, however. That was a good way to channle feeling rightfully bitter and generally awful. I'm really glad you didn't actually kill yourself- for one thing because I have friends who have tried, and for another because than I probably wouldn't have read this poem. Anyway, you might not need/want to hear this, but someone like that is... completely horrible, and I'm sure you know that--but you can't feel bad for what you did, it wasn't your fault. Blah blah blah. Don't give up trusting people, because i've learned from experience it's better to be hurt sometimes than to never get close to anyone. Anyway, the end. Beautiful poem. I really hope you feel better, and I hope things improve for you. |
| lordelfy 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseawesome poem! that musta really sucked |