Reviews for Locked in Darkness

Litheral 2007-05-16 ch 1,	The poem has some good images, but it's very chopy. You seem to want to say something else in the middle but there is nothing written. Maybe a bit more in the poem.
Karma Chameleon 2005-04-05 ch 1,	Nice poem. Well, freaky actually, but yeah. "how sicking" does not make sense though, perhaps you meant "how sickening" instead? Anyway keep up the good work. ~Karma Chameleon
Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2005-03-31 ch 1,	hi i've had friends who've had depression and one who was close to suicide. thank you for sharing this poem.mj
Faithless Juliet 2005-03-31 ch 1,	dark, but well-detailed. I love the use of metaphores to strengthen the piece. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.