this is a fascinating story so far. i really like it. keep going with it.

Yeah I know what you mean about that damn kick - Like me and my Dusman story...hehe...I need a little kick for that too. I liked the chapter - I wonder what happened. It definitely got me thinking thats for sure. I hope you update soon! Write write write...

good start...however, perhaps the plot should be developed more..

Ahh another story! Yay! Write, write ,write - WHAT HAPPENED TO MARRIAGE VS. MURDER! You never updated! How dare you?!...Anyways update this and Marriage vs. murder...now...Stop reading this review - I said update...NOW...AT THIS VERY VERY VERY MINUTE!...^_^