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Reviews For: Before And After
Falsetto
2005-04-03
ch 1, 		abuseI love business love stories and Landons! Anyway, I like it so far. The amount of detail you put in is awesome! I think you should add dates to the before/after thing though because it might make the timeline a bit clearer, but if not, I think it will still be "followable." Continue soon!
poseidon
2005-03-31
ch 1, anon.		abuseGreat beginning! Hope you update soon.
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