Skater! Lol long time no see(ehm.. ok, technically long timeno WRITE, but... :P )Ok, yep, N.Nelson here.. Changed my pen name to the one on ff. net, so..I am SO sorry! I don't know WHAT the heck's wrong with my FP Author alert, I put you there but didn't GET any Alerts, and only when I FINALLY logged in again did I find out you'd started a series! Ugh. *Starts seriously considering cursing FP's AA service.. ok, joking!*

Anyway, good introduction, nicely written and paragraphed (LoL Ghost sounds like Danny Phantom to me :P) A few grammatical errors, but those can of course go overlooked. the best part of the story is always the plot, i believe! Ok, on to your first installment!-Charis/Nat/FBG (whatever u wanna call me :P)

Pretty good though loved to see more.