 Whispered Secrets 2005-06-22 . chapter 1Haha, the last two lines are great. I love the play on words, and great rhyming and rhythm, once again. |
 MistiWhitesun 2005-05-05 . chapter 1/blinks & reads again/
Sorry, I'm poetically challenged. I didn't pick it all up, at first. But I did find it very amusing. Please continue (if you can; I know that must be
/undertone/ Wildfire is one word. The dash shouldn't have a space after it, and the last line should have the first letter capitalized, since this is a poem.
/cough/ What makes you think me a grammar maniac, again?
I still don't get—wait! Okay. /looks embarassed/ I just figured out what you meant by "The cat, you see, framed the poor dear child." "Framed" is being used as "set up." /shakes head at own stupidity/
That's better poetry than I can do—okay, so that's not saying much, but that doesn't mean that this isn't good.
Keep writing! (Though I doubt you need my encouragement to do that!) |
 Caim 2005-04-22 . chapter 1What a odd funny! I loved it though. It was so...riddle-like. Nice piece! |
 the small print 2005-04-20 . chapter 1lol, very funny take on cliches, the parody about silence and cats I particularly liked, good job! |
 Pillow Biter 2005-04-14 . chapter 1Fantastc visuals, especially the many descriptions of "words". Keep it up! |
 tearyeyedpixie67 2005-04-09 . chapter 1hehe i really like this, made me laugh! |
 A Painter of Poems 2005-04-07 . chapter 1haha, this is so funny! i totally cracked up on the last line! |
 youzi 2005-04-02 . chapter 1Haha!that's a great humour piece.I've been accused of using cliches too..even when i'm avoiding them..guess it's hard to define 'cliches'...cos the boundaries are always changing =D Anyway..great job and keep writing! |
 TawnyBEEFman000000000000Gassss 2005-04-01 . chapter 1What's with you and killing cats? GAH, GAH, AGHA, AGDJG and so on and so forth. |
 Katrina Gabrielle 2005-04-01 . chapter 1 that's great... funny! I don't know, I'm not good at reviewing stuff but I really liked it. |
 CircusCandy 2005-04-01 . chapter 1I can't stand cliches, that's the only thing the people in my school write. darkness this, blood that, dragon, sword, blah blah blah. God, I feel like burning things right now. You are going on my fav authors list |
 Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2005-03-31 . chapter 1I piece on cliches that is not cliche. A stroke of genius! |
 aBlOnDeRHermione 2005-03-31 . chapter 1lmao :)Have i ever told u that u are INSANE?! But its a good thing.And of cousre cusroity didn't kill the cat, the kid made a deal with the ice-cream man.'Spread like wild fire', Words that mean something else SIMALIES! YEA! Whats next Jill, WHATS NEXT?!?!?!??(FYI: loved it) |
 Shiroi Kakumei 2005-03-31 . chapter 1Wow..so deep...A mere student like me can't seem to comprehend it. ^.^ I like the last line so much... |