Heh! I like it.

You stole my profile format. :P

Thanks for the review!

~Namir Swiftpaw

This is a cool poem. Good for a general audience.

This I like, because, sadly, everyone can relate to it. Reading the summary I thought that this poem would come across as being overly arrogant and self-righteous, but it was neither. I commend you for that. I generally having problems in that area. Anyway, nice poem. Keep writing!