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| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-28 ch 6, | abuseso sad and thoughtful made me go all philosophical and it was really beautiful - my favourite was red ballons. |
| Jessica S1 2007-04-11 ch 6, | abuseYou write absolutely beautifully. Your prose is evocative, and I had to pause in the midst of reading because the cadence of the piece and the emotion of your words just struck me so strongly. Gorgeous. |
| xxsuicide 2007-03-05 ch 6, anon. | abusei hate you! no, seriously, i do. You are the most original writer on fictionpress that I have ever read; you have actual talent (*gasp*) |
| Slideshow 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love this piece. It's wonderful, and you write very well. The way it all comes together, and the way you tell it... it's great. It was dreamy but bittersweet and the ending made me sad. I don't know why. It sounds as if you're writing from experience, but even if it were not; that makes it even greater. Your ability to wield emotions that feel real through words is spectacular, love. Okay, I was trying to use big words and sound intelligent up there, but you get the picture. :) Lovely write. |
| euphorix 2006-07-03 ch 6, | abuseyou write realy well & i love all your memoirs. you write with a lot of honesty and flair - well done! i hope you got good marks. please write more!! :) |
| aphroditeseyes 2006-07-01 ch 6, | abuseBeautiful style of writing, you nearly made me cry. Well done. |
| RedBerries 2006-06-08 ch 6, | abuseIt sounds a lot like the end. But is it? I'm not too sure. |
| Lifestyle 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abusevery sweet. How complicating love can become... |
| raelia 2006-04-29 ch 5, anon. | abusei really like this. it's deep. it's refined. all of it. it's kinda perfect. |
| PrincessStormy 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseDid you write a series you called Confessions (of a Teenage Virgin, Female Player and (I think) the True Player? Because if you did, please please please msg me or something and tell me where I can find them. If you wanna know why, I should only have to say this... I was your Kitti! |
| You Are So Last Summer 2006-04-04 ch 5, | abuseyou know what? i absolutely love the way you write. i've never read anything that comes close or is like this. i'm in love with your pieces, they're so eloquently written, so tragic, and so beautiful. these are like those one-liner quotes i so love, personified into prose and story. the words you use are simple but weighted, and together they contain so much emotion. i totally love your stuff. |
| she's not breathing 2006-03-25 ch 5, | abuseall i can say is i'm in awe of you really jealous & i love your writing. it's inspirational like nothing is on this site. you're amazing. thankyou for sharing & being so open despite how hard it was. ~kait |
| Crimson Roses 2006-01-27 ch 4, | abuseI love your writing. Really poetic. Update soon. |
| Kjersti 2006-01-26 ch 4, anon. | abuseBeautiful stories. So touching. I loved them. |
| BlackOleander 2005-06-17 ch 2, | abuseVery emotional&sad. I loved the way you did it with the 4/4 timing thing. |