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| Homcide>Life-on-Sesame-Stre... 2005-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseOverall, liked it. But this was my favourite part: A flawless flaw of perfect perfection,Green eyes of desiring shade,Unjust, untrue, still lieing, so crude,Clean, clear, cold and cliched. good work |