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apiffany
2008-07-02
ch 4, anon.
abusei luv it!
plz continue, u ahven't updated in ages
Vampgurl99
2008-06-20
ch 4,
abuseI stumbled upon this story some time ago and I thought I had reviewed for it but I guess I never did. My most sincere apologies...really. I haven't been reviewing anything I read which is a horrible habit to get into but now that school's done with I can catch up on all my forgotten reviews!

Anyways, this won't be as indepth as other reviews I write becuase I read this story so long ago and you haven't updated!! I wish you would update but who knows what your schedule is like. :(

I really really love this story. The whole mystery surrounding your characters and especially the 'club' it's fantastic! I really like how you wait till mid chapter in chapter one to describe Keegan's appearance. I had built him up to be this geeky boy with no social life, and pasty white skin. I wish there was a picture of him so I could see this 'hidden' beauty! Do you have a picture of a real person in mind? I'm surprised that Aindreas hasn't done a make over on Keegan cause that's what I would do!

I'm a little confused when Keegan gets dressed. I'm assuming he's secure with his sexuality to dress up in heels and everything? Is the place where he live, tolerate gays and those who do not meet the 'norm' so to speak? Or is he closeted? Cause I didn't really peg Keegan for being so, forthcoming in his dress? I'm actually surprised he put the heels and make up on because he's so geeky I just thought he wouldn't know how to dress himself if he's wearing bowties and everything.

When Keegan goes into the Bacca di Sangue for the first time, how he says that it exceeded his expectations it kind of reminded me of Moulin Rouge the movie. I have no clue why but for some reason it did...

Ah! Keegan's losing his inhibitions!! It's so cute! haha, minus the part where he's drunk after one glass of alcohol. That's kind of sad but again, love the description of the entire dance bit and everything. Still very mysterious!

Okay, how do you pronounce Evrissyan? Is it Ev-ris-E-an? Where did you come up with this name and does it have a meaning behind it? I already like him. How he overcomes his 'lusts' to not touch Keegan, oh so sweet of him!


Ugh and then you leave me with a nasty cliffy at the end of chapter 4! How could you!! Now I really really want you to update. I am still mystified as to why Keegan passed out after one drink. Did he have a blood cherry? Or maybe he's the lightest light weight around.


I know that you haven't updated in almost 7 months but is there a chance that you're out of writers block and have something new? If not, could you please post a chapter with an AN updating us with what's going on with this story and your others? I really like all of you stories and I would hate to see them go on hiatus or even worse, taken down! *le gasp* please let me know what's going on! Pretty please with a cherry on top? Thanks!


vampgurl99
JtheChosen1
2008-04-10
ch 4,
abusethis is a gr8 story! i hope that you continue this story again!
oo
2008-04-08
ch 4, anon.
abusei really love this story. you should update here as you do on aff! i gushed over the new chapter on aff. good to see that your still updating every now and then. thats where i found the story and probally ive been reading this story since the beginning, thats been like years ago.
Marylyn-Mercy
2007-12-13
ch 4,
abuseWonderful chapter! I thought you'd given up on this one and was quite sad. :-P Can't wait for the next chapter
cryingelf
2007-12-08
ch 4,
abuseInteresting so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter
Zulu
2007-12-08
ch 4, anon.
abuseI remember reading this at adultfanfiction and loving it, your on chapter 6 on that, right? anyway looking forword to chapter 7.
strawberry buttercup
2007-11-07
ch 3,
abusesince you have been most courteous to us by informing us of your where abouts, i will do the same and allow you the time you need. i do love the idea of the story so far and am quite eager to learn more. but your needs are obviously greater than mine so i can wait...
beloved18
2007-04-06
ch 1,
abuseyou should write more of the story on here or on i rather enjoy this story
Silver Daratraz
2005-11-27
ch 3,
abuseupdate this when u can. i like how u use the word. copulation. *smiles*
sketch13
2005-10-25
ch 3, anon.
abusei like it, i like it, i like it. though i've read this a thousand times before this is the first time i'm reviewing. your story, like the club, is intoxicating. i'm practically addicted to it. god, help me, but i wish a club like this really existed. ah, talk about heaven. well, bye-bye, now (giggles)
Alleyway Cat
2005-08-16
ch 3,
abuseI am sorry to hear this.
C. Evangel
2005-08-16
ch 3,
abuseI do hope you update soon.
Walter Dash
2005-07-03
ch 2,
abuseYou have my condolences with any troubles you have been experiencing. I will endeavor to be patient for you updates, and I would lastly like to express my simple love for your story. I hope things will be resolved for you soon.
Esquirella
2005-06-22
ch 3,
abuseI'm so sorry that you're going through difficulty. I'll be here when you're ready to write again!
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