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| Galadh Niniel 2006-07-06 ch 1,   | Very true. A sad and moving poem, the dhort lines and rhymes somehow fit the topic well in this instance. Sad and beautiful. |
| Miss Kai 2006-02-28 ch 1, | That was an extremely powerful and beautiful poem. I love the comparison of writing words to flowing blood! |
| Sapphire Spectrum 2006-01-06 ch 1, | Woah. I loved the way it rhymed, but still flowed. I hate it when poems are trying to rhyme... I usually just don't rhyme (I suck at it). But anyway, great poem! Goin' on my faves! |
| Jezsh 2006-01-02 ch 1, | nice work, eerie yet personal. |
| cornered.sensations 2006-01-02 ch 1, | you've described this so well, keep writing |
| SliversofSilverPain 2005-11-16 ch 1, | woah. so dark, so cool. greast concept and ideas. amazing imagery. well done! |
| Ky-Ky Apocalypse 2005-10-23 ch 1, | Wow that was deep |
| GingerKiss 2005-09-24 ch 1, | Wow. I'm not normally into rhyming poems, although I often rhyme my songs...but this is extremely elegant, you have a great sense of rhythmn and use your words wisely if you get what I mean. Keep up the good work, I think I'll be adding you to my favs. |
| Beautifula 2005-09-07 ch 1, | Intense and direct yet beautiful and flows really well. i loved it. |
| Out-Of-Reality 2005-08-25 ch 1, | Another strong ending. When I read it, I got an image of a girl signing a suicide note with her blood. Your words really di paint a picture. Very awesome writing |
| Metallic Spica 2005-07-21 ch 1, | yo...write more! ^__^ |
| Hopeful Light 2005-07-19 ch 1, | This is great. I think I know what it's about now:) It's about how being a deep, feeling person with different ideas will set you out of the crowd right? |
| citrus scented 2005-07-17 ch 1, | oh wonderful, a really passionate and heartfelt piece of writing. very effective and touching. great stuff. |
| Emotions Running Deep 2005-06-03 ch 1, | Very deeply full of emotions, just overlowing in this poem. Well written, thanks for the review! |
| Tears from a Fairytale 2005-06-01 ch 1, | this is so beautiful. |