i like the loop aspect, beginning and end connected. this "eric" is rather harsh, but i imagine most people would feel betrayed the same. you just make him out to be much harsher, somehow. but i liked the loop.

Hello.Just finished reading your short short story.It is quite interesting and fresh, especially since it is a situation that does arise (although maybe not your character's masturbation part). It has happened to me.Back to the story: The loop was a good idea, I have not seen it too many times.The story flows quite well, with hardly any area to really make a drastic improvement on.I would review the line: "All you were is a good ** to me."(mixed tenses)It is probably part of the character's normal speech pattern. If so, then I apologize for bringing it up.

Lovely story.Hope to read more.

Argh, an endless story. Would be interesting to know what the background for this is. Real-life experience? Boredom? Anger? A little of all? An interesting scene in any case which sets an uncomfortable mood and leaves the reader wondering whether the protagonist is capable of emotions, or whether he is suppressing them effectively.

Wow nice one...smart move man.