|Reviews for Forgotten Bones|
| Out-Of-Reality 4/9/05 . chapter 1
It had a morbidly calming feel to it. It was almost like I was reading the call of the wild again. The last line was a really good ending. Very nicely done
| simpleplan13 4/5/05 . chapter 1
creepy, but cool descriptions
| RemyxZer0 4/5/05 . chapter 1
The full ignorance of death is refreshing. It seems as though you are just trying to make your reader look at the fact that THEY WERE ONCE ALIVE! Wonderful.
| Educating Milo 4/4/05 . chapter 1
This is cool
| Biene 4/3/05 . chapter 1
whoa...love the description. What inspired you to write this?
| XxParalaixX 4/1/05 . chapter 1
It's really kool.
| DathomiranSciFiAuthor 4/1/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful, beautiful description and imagery.
| Selah Ex Animo 4/1/05 . chapter 1
Ah, what do you mean it's not that good? 'Tis excellent! I loved reading it. Every line was beautiful, and the imagery so evocative. I really liked:
"Dead faces that still flicker with emotion,
Standing against time’s corrosion
Outstretched arms of death and gentleness,
Lonely bones that never rest."
Beautiful poem. Kudos!
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 4/1/05 . chapter 1
very etheric. Loved it. The descriptions put me right there in the museum.