It had a morbidly calming feel to it. It was almost like I was reading the call of the wild again. The last line was a really good ending. Very nicely done

creepy, but cool descriptions

The full ignorance of death is refreshing. It seems as though you are just trying to make your reader look at the fact that THEY WERE ONCE ALIVE! Wonderful.

This is cool

whoa...love the description. What inspired you to write this?

It's really kool.

Beautiful, beautiful description and imagery.

Ah, what do you mean it's not that good? 'Tis excellent! I loved reading it. Every line was beautiful, and the imagery so evocative. I really liked:

"Dead faces that still flicker with emotion,

Standing against time’s corrosion

Outstretched arms of death and gentleness,

Lonely bones that never rest."

Beautiful poem. Kudos!

- Selah

very etheric. Loved it. The descriptions put me right there in the museum.